Wednesday 17 March 2010
Prelim script
(Yasmin storms through doors and rushes to stairs, begins to asend).
(Edward enters through doors and chases after Yasmin).
'Yasmin whats the matter?'
(Yasmin stops to listen, roll's eye's in responce and turns to face Edward).
'As if you dont know, are you really that oblivious?'
'What are you talking about?'
'I've had enough, its over'
(Yasmin turns and leaves up the stairs).
'Yasmin wait!'
(Edward sighs, and drops to sit on the stairs, head in his hands)
(Edward enters through doors and chases after Yasmin).
'Yasmin whats the matter?'
(Yasmin stops to listen, roll's eye's in responce and turns to face Edward).
'As if you dont know, are you really that oblivious?'
'What are you talking about?'
'I've had enough, its over'
(Yasmin turns and leaves up the stairs).
'Yasmin wait!'
(Edward sighs, and drops to sit on the stairs, head in his hands)
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feedback
I pitched my story to my group various feedbacks was given which included a lot of positive points; the theme was based on drama romance and esma and noriane managed to guess the theme which was good due to the story being straight forward and easy to understand. After I had pitched the story to them, I then ask esma to pitch my story back to me to see how well she understood my story.
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Tuesday 16 March 2010
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